Leeds Library Promotional Campaign - Crit

After a crit I had, people mentioned they liked the imagery but felt the colours were old and really dated the work. This is not really something I can help as these are the colours of Leeds City Council, but Justin said I could create a version of the promotional work that is more my style. So I will make some changes to colours and fonts, which are more my style and I think this will create a more appealing contemporary aesthetic. It was also mentioned that I could try and cut into the books to give the imagery a bit more of a solid feel instead of the typography sticking out of the books. I will try this to see how it affects the imagery.